My Favourite Ice Cream

My favourite ice cream is vanilla. I like it because it is as white as snow.
                                                           by Jazzmin 

God Strand

Our thoughtful God made the river so we could swim and fish in it.

Describe a Picture

Learning goal: I am learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria:  I can do this when

• I add descriptive adjectives
• I add powerful verbs

The waves splashed and crashed into the boat. The people were scared that they might drown. The sky looked stormy and dark.

                                                     by Jazzmin

What I did In The Holidays

Learning goal: I am learning to write a recount text.

In the holidays I built a robot with blocks. It looked cool because I liked the creation I made. I was proud of myself. 
                                                by Jazzmin

The Baby Lion

Learning goal: I am learning to write about the part of the story I like the best.

The part of the story that I liked the best was when the baby lion became the King of the jungle. 
                                                   by Jazzmin

In The Holidays

Learning goal:  I am learning to write a recount. 

In the holidays I went to Nana's house. Nana gave me a bubble bath. I said, thank you nana. Nana said, you welcome.
                                                  By Jazzmin